Jennifer's Observation

Here is a link to an example of an observation report.  You can use this example to guide your writing.  

Try to use as much science vocabulary that you can.  E.g. instead of saying ‘sucked up the water’ you could say ‘absorbed the water through the stem’

WALT write an observation report
Introduction: The first paragraph should introduce what you are going to inform the audience about.   e.g. This term we have been learning about plants...	This term we have been learning about plants,science experiments and investigating about how the plant is going to grow.Our group is the plant group we are called as the group 4.What happened was that daisy  was  the one we put in the  sunlight it wasn’t even blooming into a beautiful plant But one leaf of the plant fell of like a bird has died  but  Dandelion  was the  one under the box it was growing gorgeously like it was suppose too.
Procedure: Tell your audience exactly what you did and how you did it.  You might use commas to list your actions. You might use words like:  when, then, after that...	Dandelion was growing faster than Daisy.Dandelion was  having lots of shade and it was was growing like fire  Dandelion is stronger than ever.Daisy is dying because she doesn’t have enough shade.
Observations: Tell your audience what you noticed.  What were the changes?  Why do you think those changes happened?  What were some problems? You might use words like: on the first day, noticed, observed, changed...	Unfortunately Daisy and Dandelion  had died and now we can’t help daisy and fix her because she is dead and we don’t know what to do to help Daisy and Dandelion
Conclusion: Tell your audience what you learned from the experiment.  What were the key things that you found out.  Tell your audience how you felt at the end of your experiment. You might use words like:  I discovered, I realised, I learned that...	I learnt that sometimes plants and flowers can die from when they don’t have enough sunlight or enough shade.